reword to include other objects and transitive mutations

site/content/tutorial/02-reactivity/04-updating-arrays-and-objects/text.md

@@ -2,9 +2,11 @@
 title: Updating arrays and objects
 ---
 
-Because Svelte's reactivity is triggered by assignments, using array methods that mutate the array alone, like `push` and `splice`, won't automatically cause updates. For example, clicking the button calls the `addNumber` function, but doesn't trigger the recalculation of `sum` and does not update the rendered page.
+Svelte's reactivity is triggered by assignments. Methods that mutate arrays/objects internally will not trigger updates by themselves.
 
-One way to fix that is to add an assignment that would otherwise be redundant:
+In this example, clicking the "Add a number" button calls the `addNumber` function, which appends a number to the array but doesn't trigger the recalculation of `sum` and does not update the rendered page.
+
+One way to fix that would be to assign `numbers` to itself to tell the compiler it has changed:
 
 ```js
 function addNumber() {
@@ -13,7 +15,7 @@ function addNumber() {
 }
 ```
 
-But there's a more idiomatic solution:
+You can also get a similar result using the ES6 spread syntax:
 
 ```js
 function addNumber() {
@@ -21,7 +23,7 @@ function addNumber() {
 }
 ```
 
-You can use similar patterns to replace `pop`, `shift`, `unshift` and `splice`.
+The same rule applies for other array methods such as `pop`, `shift`, `splice` and for other objects such as `Map.set`.
 
 Assignments to *properties* of arrays and objects — e.g. `obj.foo += 1` or `array[i] = x` — work the same way as assignments to the values themselves.
 
@@ -31,11 +33,22 @@ function addNumber() {
 }
 ```
 
-A simple rule of thumb: the name of the updated variable must appear on the left hand side of the assignment. For example this...
+However, indirect assignments to references such as this...
 
 ```js
 const foo = obj.foo;
 foo.bar = 'baz';
 ```
 
+or 
+
+```js
+function quox(thing) {
+	thing.foo.bar = 'baz';
+}
+quox(obj);
+```
+
 ...won't trigger reactivity on `obj.foo.bar`, unless you follow it up with `obj = obj`.
+
+A simple rule of thumb: the name of the updated variable must directly appear on the left hand side of the assignment.