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Co-authored-by: Ben McCann <322311+benmccann@users.noreply.github.com>

documentation/blog/2023-07-01-whats-new-in-svelte-july-2023.md

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 For a full list of all the changes to the Svelte compiler, including unreleased changes, check out the [CHANGELOG](https://github.com/sveltejs/svelte/blob/master/packages/svelte/CHANGELOG.md).
 
 ## What's new in SvelteKit
-No breaking changes or any big new features in SvelteKit this month. But there's lots of awesome bug fixes in the [CHANGELOG](https://github.com/sveltejs/kit/blob/master/packages/kit/CHANGELOG.md)!
+This month there were lots of awesome [bug fixes](https://github.com/sveltejs/kit/blob/master/packages/kit/CHANGELOG.md), so be sure to upgrade to the latest version! There were no breaking changes or new features as work focused on stability.
 
-If you're looking for adapter-specific changes, check out the CHANGELOGs in each of the `adapter` directories in [packages](https://github.com/sveltejs/kit/tree/master/packages).
+If you're looking for adapter-specific changes, check out the CHANGELOGs in each of [the `adapter` directories](https://github.com/sveltejs/kit/tree/master/packages).
 
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